I finally got a chance to hear your review- and I wasn't as satisfied as I thought I would be about it. Your review content was very-very short, especially if you were to type it in an article, and you talked as if you were reading from an index card. It really didn't seem like you were discussing it from your personal point of view. You also have pauses in the mic (which you can CLEARLY hear) that are very disruptive to the video. I would have made one recording discussing the all the section together. This way, you transition smoothly to the next section after you're done talking, and it doesn't sound like you're narrating a book.I'm sorry if I sound a bit harsh about the way I'm explaining myself, but you need to make some improvements before you continue this (great and original) idea. If it helps, watch some tasselfoot videos, and listen how he presents his Tass tips. They transition well, and he adds things in as he talks about it.
hokage, that sounded really harsh :(Also, I can't hear the audio in the video at all. I turned the Youtube and my computer's volume all the way to max, and could hear a whisper, but couldn't make anything out. :(
Yeah- he starts off with "I'm JaumeBG and this is a review of Vox Populi, Vox Dei for KCG. You can find it at kongcg.blogspot.com"Then he goes into the review.
Thank you for discussing your opinions about it. I'll try my best at making a better and longer review next time, and also increase the volume of it.
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